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"By 2005, when it was formed, so-and-so has mainly focused on offshore outsourcing software development. So-and-so was registered as a company in 2008, and hires 8 full time employees and a number of temporary employees."

Since it was formed in 2005, so-and-so has focused primarily on outsourcing offshore software development. It was registered as a company in 2008, and has 8 full-time employees, as well as a number of temporary employees.

Formed and registered as a company in 2005, So and So hires eight full-time employees and a number of temporary employees, and has focused mainly on offshore outsourcing software development.

OR

So and So, a company formed and registered in 2005, hires eight (8) full-time employees and a number of temporary employees, and has focused mainly on offshore outsourcing software development.

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