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What about this flyer? CHECK THE ENGLISH AS I SPEAK SPANISH PLEASE!?


鈥?Tired and overworked?
鈥?Do you want to grow your business and make it sounds more professional?
鈥?Do you spend a lot of money in costs of operation?
Let Us Help You Grow Your Business
Smart VOS
Virtual Office Solutions
Smart VOS is a solid organization whose core principles reside in offering virtual office solutions for your business at competitive prices. The structure of the company has been customized to fit the needs of today鈥檚 professional, offering administrative solutions for you or your business.
What we offer?
Smart VOS bilingual STAFF will handle each of your calls in a prompt, professional and expert manner, will coordinate your events, take customers orders, plan a trip for you and call your customers whenever you need with your own local phone or toll free number with customizable scripts, voicemail, electronic fax, call forwarding and many other benefits!.
Which is the difference with a traditional receptionist?
Basically the costs of operation, you can reduce up to 5

to 55% on annual expenses. You won't need to pay payroll taxes, benefits or insurance for a full-time employee. You'll also save money by not having the phone system, office space, or other tools a receptionist or admin staff needs. See the following chart:

鈥ired and overworked?
鈥o you want your business to grow?
Do you want your business to be more efficient?
鈥o you spend a lot of money for costs of operation?

We Can Help Your Business Grow!

Smart VOS

Smart VOS offers virtual office solutions for your business at competitive prices. The structure of the company has been customized to fit the needs of today鈥檚 professional, offering administrative solutions for you or your business.

What do we offer?

Smart VOS has a bilingual STAFF that will handle each of your calls in a prompt, professional and expert manner. We will coordinate your events, take customers orders, plan a trip for you and call your customers whenever you need.

We offer customizable scripts, voicemail, electronic fax, call forwarding and many other benefits!.

How are we different from a traditional receptionist?
The cost of operation is much less!

On the second line it should be sound not soundS. I don't know about business but I think the third line should be "Do you spend a lot of money on operation costs?"
and it should be "what do we offer?' or just "what we offer"

customers' orders

驴鈥?Cansado y abusado?
驴鈥?quiere usted crecer su negocio y hacerlo parece a m谩s profesional?
驴鈥?usted gastan mucho dinero en gastos de la operaci贸n?
D茅jenos Ayudarle a Cultivar Su Negocio
VOS elegante
Soluciones de Oficina Virtuales
VOS elegante es una organizaci贸n s贸lida cuyos principios principales residen en el ofrecimiento de soluciones de oficina virtuales para su negocio en precios competitivos. La estructura de la compa帽铆a ha sido personalizada para encajar las necesidades del profesional de hoy, ofreciendo a soluciones administrativas para usted

Looks good from a language aspect...

From a marketing aspect I'd cut out ALOT of words, make it simple. They'll ask questions later.

The only thing i would change is instead of saying "grow you business" say "expand"

that's really good ad :] just make sure you specifi when you say "you can reduce up to 5"--->reduce up too 5 what?

Mucho bueno, pero cinco que?

Do you want to grow your business and make it *sound* more professional?

bueno

where it says "what we offer?" it should say "What do we offer." There is no word for do in spanish so I understand why you left it out....I took spanish 1.

STAFF should read staff. no caps needed

Then it says "will coordinate your events"

it should say we will....you have to put the subject

also start another sentence with that.

So...We will coordinate your events, take customers oders, plan a trip for you, and call your customers when necessary with your own local phone or toll free number. We offer customizable scrips, voicemail, electronic fax, call fowarding and many other benefits!


and at the end it just ends...so i'm wondering if you have it all there

Est谩 cansado y sobrecargado?
鈥?驴Quiere hacer crecer su negocio y hacer lo que suena m谩s profesional?
鈥?驴vas a gastar mucho dinero en costos de operaci贸n?
Vamos a ayudarle a crecer su negocio
Smart VOS
Oficina Virtual de Soluciones
Smart VOS es una s贸lida organizaci贸n cuyos principios fundamentales reside en ofrecer soluciones de oficina virtual para su negocio a precios competitivos. La estructura de la empresa se ha personalizado para satisfacer las necesidades de hoy en d铆a profesionales, ofreciendo soluciones administrativas para que usted o su empresa.
驴Qu茅 ofrecemos?
Smart VOS personal biling眉e se encargar谩 de cada una de sus llamadas de forma r谩pida, profesional y de expertos manera, se encargar谩 de coordinar sus eventos, tomar 贸rdenes de los clientes, planificar un viaje para usted y para llamar a sus clientes siempre que lo necesite con su propio local de tel茅fono o n煤mero telef贸nico gratuito con personalizable scripts, buz贸n de voz, fax electr贸nico, reenv铆o de llamadas y muchos otros beneficios!.
驴Cu谩l es la diferencia con la tradicional recepcionista?
B谩sicamente los costos de operaci贸n, puede reducir hasta un 5

What about this flyer? CHECK THE ENGLISH AS I SPEAK SPANISH PLEASE!?
鈥?Tired and overworked?
鈥?Do you want to grow your business and make it sounds more professional?
鈥?Do you spend a lot of money in costs of operation?
Let Us Help You Grow Your Business
Smart VOS
Virtual Office Solutions
Smart VOS is a solid organization whose core principles reside in offering virtual office solutions for your business at competitive prices. The structure of the company has been customized to fit the needs of today鈥檚 professional, offering administrative solutions for you or your business.
What we offer?
Smart VOS bilingual STAFF will handle each of your calls in a prompt, professional and expert manner, will coordinate your events, take customers' orders, plan a trip for you, and call your customers whenever you need, using your own local phone or toll free number with customizable scripts, voicemail, electronic fax, call forwarding and many other benefits!
Which is the difference from a traditional receptionist?
Basically the costs of operation, you can reduce up to 5

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