Can you give me a hand?

I am writing a paper.The following is the abstract.Do I express it correctly,if not,please help me.Thanks a lot!
Abstract: With the development of beef cattle breeding industry and the popularization of computer application technology in China, the intelligent decision-making system for beef cattle production is an effective way to extend beef cattle breeding technology .This paper focuses on the exploring the beef cattle intelligence decision-making system ,basing on the researching of system module design, the development strategy and its special functions .
Key words: beef cattle锛沬ntelligent decision-making system锛沝evelopment strategy

looks great to me!

have a nice day!

Sorry, but this isn't an abstract- a proper one anyway. If you want my help just let me know and I'll give you some pointers.

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